Silent Longing

11855552_10206128556949733_1927403783_nRusty bell and chain
Longing to be rung again,
Suffers silent pain.

8 thoughts on “Silent Longing

  1. One of the things that struck me about this haiku was the end rhyme, which isn’t a typical feature of the haiku form. It works well considering the subject of the poem and the repetition, like a bell, of the “chain,” “again”, and “pain.” Cheers.

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